Feeling good about my progress on Growing Up Ozark Poor! So far I’m 66% complete on the Editing phase. I made it through one section of major rework. Have a couple more to do.
Growing Up Ozark Poor
My mantra is “Kill . . . show . . . deepen.” First, I seek to kill the passive voice. Second, the writing must “show, not tell” the action. And third, I’m trying to deepen the point of view of the main character, Jimmy. I’ve also decided Jimmy’s friend needs more “page time.”
Editting is intensive work. I admire your determination to see this to is completion. I’m looking forward to the final results!